Archive for September, 2011

5 Terrific Things for Tuesday: Fun Facts about Author Jocelyn Green

Hello Fiction Friends,

I had the pleasure of meeting one of our great authors this weekend. When I first started working here at Moody Publishers, I was corresponding with Jocelyn Green and noticed on her email signature that she lives on the same street that I did when I attended the University of Northern Iowa in Cedar Falls. It was a fun little coincidence to me. Well, my husband and I took a little trip back to that area this past weekend for a get together with some of his college buddies and their wives and I was able to pop in on Jocelyn and finally meet her face to face. This was my first sit down with an author and it was really neat to hear about her process and see firsthand the different ways in which she organizes herself and her thoughts. Here are 5 fun little facts that I learned about Jocelyn and her writing process:

1) The 4 Civil War fiction novels that Jocelyn is writing for us are her first fiction novels. She has done so much research. In order to keep her ideas organized, she tapes colored index cards to the wall with one line running east to west with actual historical events and then cards running north and south that are fiction lines she is adding in.





2) She also keeps bulletin boards that are packed with pictures of real people from the specific time and place she is writing about, samples of clothes, and pictures of the actual places.




3) She has her own writing room where she keeps all of her materials and said her necessary items include a cup of coffee, her coffee cup warmer, a candle, and writing pants.





4) Jocelyn is a wife and mother of 2 children on top of being a busy author. She keeps her house rolling smoothly by preparing dinners in bulk and freezing them so that her family can still sit down together for dinner at night even though she is working hard at writing.






5) My favorite thing that Jocelyn told me is that at one point in time it was relaxing to have her cat pounce around while she was writing but now she has to keep an eye on the cat because not too long ago he caught his tail on fire while playing too close to Jocelyn’s candle. That would be a little stressful I would say! He looks so sweet and innocent here!





It was so great meeting Jocelyn and getting a chance to learn firsthand what a writer does in preparation for a novel. Thanks again for your time and hospitality! Go Panthers!




Coffee Withdrawal at ACFW (American Christian Fiction Writers)

Coffee withdrawal at ACFW

By Deb Keiser

I stood on the platform waiting for my train into Chicago yesterday morning and glanced down at my iPhone. Like most of the commuters our faces were turned toward something to read—a newspaper, book, or an electronic device. Hardly anyone talks first thing in the morning. Not enough coffee yet.

I read this hysterically funny email string of comments about coffee makers at the American Christian Fiction Writers Conference which runs September 22-25 officially, but many participants are arriving on Wednesday.

Anyway, it appears that there will not be coffee makers in the rooms at the convention hotel, the Hyatt. It was so hard for me to believe that a reputable national hotel chain would not know that coffee is one of the nation’s staples. It is like soap—everyone needs it.  I had to call to discover for myself if it was true—and it is! “No coffee makers in the rooms, for green reasons.” The desk clerk told me when I called the hotel. Sounds fishy to me . . . next thing you know caffeine addicts will be escorted outside to drink coffee and forced to join the smokers on the street. I can just see us huddled together in the dead of winter on the sidewalks of Chicago.

No less than 16 people commented on the hardship of going without coffee first thing in the morning. I think that was the longest email string sent from the ACFW conference. Christian fiction writers definitely have their priorities. Coffee first then everything else.

I totally get it. In an attempt to give up coffee, I’ve been drinking tea first thing in the morning since December 2010, nine . . .  long . . . months. Drinking tea at work, too. But I’ve been “treating” myself to Starbucks lattes with an ever increasing frequency. I’m now a Starbucks Gold Card member. Good for Starbucks but bad for my pocketbook.  

I finally broke down and bought an espresso maker. After tallying up all I have spent on lattes in a given month, I decided that it was time to stop the bleeding. I checked on-line for the best price, make and model, but in the end I drove to the nearest Kohl’s and bought one for 50% off. I was so proud of myself—it cost less than a month-of-lattes.

In the end I failed to give up coffee. But I’m back in sync with my people—Caffeinated Christians for Fiction. Think that American Christian Fiction Writers would change the name?

Tonight I rest assured that on Thursday there will be coffee served on the plane to St. Louis bound for the ACFW (or the new CCFF?) conference. See you in St. Louie!

5 Terrific Things for Tuesday: Favorite Places to Read

Good morning,

We asked 5 of our authors to tell us where their favorite spot is to read. Here is what we heard from them:

1) Susan Page Davis-Author of Captive Trail

I’ll read anywhere, but I love to sit outside on our back deck with a book. In good weather, the breeze and the birdsong add to the experience. I usually have a cup of tea handy, too.

2) Vickie McDonough-Author of Long Trail Home

I read everywhere, but my favorite place is in my recliner with my feet up and the lamp turned up high. I take a book with me almost all the time and read whenever I get a chance. I got stopped at a light today that I knew was especially long, snatched up my book, and read a page before it turned green. My husband isn’t much of a talker, so whenever he’s driving, I’m reading. I still prefer a good, old-fashioned paperback to reading digitally, but I’ve read some of those too. 

3) Darlene Franklin-Author of Lone Star Trail

I don’t have a place where I don’t like to read; if I run out reading material while I am out, I will buy another book, even if I have ten unread at home. But I would guess that the two places where I do the most reading are my bedroom and with meals. I often sit down to read a few pages and find myself still there an hour later and 100 pages further into the book . . . and then I have to finish, because I’m so close. Since I’m single and self-employed, I can do that.

4) Tessa Afshar-Author of Pearl in the Sand and the upcoming Harvest of Rubies Series

Some people can sleep anywhere: on the plane, in the car, sitting in front of the television. One of my friends actually fell asleep standing up, once. I don’t have that talent. But I can read anywhere. As I eat, while the radio is blaring, in the gym, when people are trying to talk to me on the phone (I try to avoid doing this last. But if you call me when I’m in the middle of a particularly good part, I might not be answerable for my actions). So I don’t really have a favorite place for reading. I’m not that picky. Any place can become my favorite if the book is engaging.

5) Jocelyn Green-Author of Faith Deployed, Faith Deployed…Again, and the upcoming Civil War Fiction Series

If the weather is at all decent, my favorite place to read is on the chaise lounge on our backyard patio, preferably with a mango pineapple smoothie sitting on the table next to it. With a flowering crab tree and hydrangeas behind me, and hostas, geraniums, and lilies in front, it’s my perfect little retreat spot. Of course, my three-year-old son and five-year-old daughter think so too, so usually when I read out there I’m listening to their training wheels rolling over the paving stones, along with the birds and the bees. Pure bliss. (Assuming no sibling rivalry breaks out.)  During the colder months here in Iowa, my favorite reading spot is my chair-and-a-half recliner in the living room, with a cinnamon, pumpkin, or evergreen candle lit nearby and a steaming mug of hazelnut coffee within reach. Our cat Chloe will usually join me here too. If I’m lucky, she’ll behave herself instead of trying to sit on my open book. Those are my favorite places to read, but I will read wherever I can, even if it’s just a few pages at a time. Thank goodness books are portable. 

Where do you like to read??

5 Terrific Things for Tuesday: 5 Ideas for Better Stories

5 Ideas for Better Stories

Today I would like to share the wisdom of others, from some of my favorite books on the craft and life of writing. Unfortunately in my dash to leave home this morning I forgot some of my resources on the granite countertop next to my fridge—a happy accident in hindsight. I will have more to share with you next time.

 From Bird by Bird – by Anne Lamott

1) The ABDCE of Writing

I heard Alice Adams give a lecture . . . . She uses a formula when writing a short story, which goes ABDCE, for Action, Background, Development, Climax, and Ending. You begin with action that is compelling enough to draw us in, make us want to know more. Background is where you let us see and know who these people are, how they’ve come to be together, what was going on before the opening of the story. Then you develop these people, so that we learn what they care most about. The plot—the drama, the actions, the tension—will grow out of that. You move them along until everything comes together in the climax, after which things are different for the main character, different in some real way. And then there is the ending: what is our sense of who these people are now, what are they left with, what happened, and what did it mean?

2) Know Your Characters

Find out what each character cares most about in the world because then you will have discovered what’s at stake. Find a way to express this discovery in action, then let your people set about finding or holding onto or defending whatever it is. They you can take them from good to bad and back again, or from bad to good or from lost to found. But something must be at stake or you will not have tension and your readers will not turn the pages. Think of a hockey player—there had better be a puck out there on the ice, or he is going to look pretty ridiculous.

From Writing for the Soul by Jerry B. Jenkins

3) Point of View is a Party

Imagine your story as a party with you as host. You’ve invited old friends, new friends, neighbors, and acquaintances. Your job is to choreograph the events so people feel comfortable and never wonder what’s going on.

You greet guests at the door and introduce them to each other, get conversations started. Without being intrusive, your aim is to make sure everyone has a good time.

We’ve all been to parties where the host has not covered the basics. Although we don’t expect our host to be the center of attention, we expect her to manage the details. When this is done right, we hardly notice. We simply know we’ve had a good time. When details are neglected, everyone leaves with a bad taste.

Picture yourself as the host of a fiction party. Invite readers to a treat. Don’t take center stage, but manage the basics in such a way that the reader barely notices. Nothing should jar her as she engages with your characters and plot.

No one should notice that you followed the rules of perspective, that you limited your point of view to one character per scene. But they’ll notice if you don’t.

4) Internal Dialogue

Getting inside a person’s head is fun. Imagine a character thinking, I hate that guy and always have. He ripped me off, stole my wife, and crashed my car.

Now put him in a scene with his nemesis and have him say, “Good to see you again, Phil. I’m looking forward to working together.” When Phil responds positively, the reader knows someone’s lying. Probably both of them. Continue that way throughout your story, and the reader will wonder to the end who is being real and who is not.

From Writing Down the Bones – by Natalie Goldberg

5) Be Specific

Be specific. Don’t say “fruit.” Tell what kind of fruit. Give things the dignity of their names. Just as with human beings, it is rude to say, “Hey girl, get in line.” That “girl” has a name. (As a matter of fact, if she’s at least twenty yours old, she’s a woman, not a “girl” at all.) Things too, have names. It is much better to say, “the geranium in the window” than “the flower in the window.” “Geranium”—that one word gives us a much more specific picture. It penetrates more deeply into the beingness of that flower. It immediately gives us the scene by the window—red petals, green circular leaves, all straining toward sunlight.

By Deb Keiser

Two Conflicts One City: September 11, 2001 and the Civil War in Washington

Two Conflicts One City: September 11, 2001 and the Civil War in Washington

By Jocelyn Green

This coming Sunday, I’ll be back in Washington, D.C., to commemorate the tenth anniversary of the terrorist attacks of September 11, 2001. I lived in Virginia and worked on Capitol Hill in 2001, and September 11 will forever be ingrained in the fabric of who I am.

One scene (out of many) that always comes to mind was the mad rush of people running away, on foot, filling the streets of Washington, D.C., in a slow-motion race to get out. Women running in their stockings, their high heeled shoes in their hands. Men in suits and college kids in T-shirts and jeans—all of them, running away. Our nation’s capital was truly like a ghost town by the end of the day, and some people did not return for days, or for weeks.

Every gorgeous blue-sky day in September reminds me of 9-11-01. But for the last several months, I have also been remembering—no, studying—another historic event in our nation’s history. This year we honor the 150th anniversary of the Civil War.

Instead of being deserted, Washington swelled from a pre-war population of 63,000 to more than 200,000 people. Soldiers flooded in to protect the Union capital against the Confederate forces on the doorstep. Waves of sick and injured troops came washing back to it.

But soldiers were not the only ones flocking to danger. Women, too, left their hoop skirts and silks behind and boldly went to the seat of war as nurses. The idea was revolutionary—nurses had been male up to that point. But with only 28 surgeons for the entire Army of the North, the Medical Department was forced to accept a little help. And so, though the surgeons detested the decision, women nurses tended the wounds of war.

Many of these women were shunned by their family and friends, accused of being prostitutes (why else would a lady want to be around masses of half-naked men?), and once at the hospitals, they were treated even worse by the male medical staff who were trying to force them out.

It’s the story of these women that have inspired me to write my first historical novel, Narrow Passages, which follows the story of a wealthy New York woman who gives up everything for the chance to pursue a calling that takes her outside the walls of the Victorian home. The main character, Charlotte Waverly, is closely based on the real woman, twenty-eight year-old Georgeanna Woolsey, who recorded this:

Some of the bravest women I have ever known were among this first company of army nurses. . . . Some of them were women of the truest refinement and culture; and day after day they quietly and patiently worked, doing, by order of the surgeon, things which not one of those gentlemen would have dared to ask of a woman whose male relative stood able and ready to defend her and report him. I have seen small white hands scrubbing floors, washing windows, and performing all menial offices. I have known women, delicately cared for at home, half fed in hospitals, hard worked day and night, and given, when sleep must be had, a wretched closet just large enough for a camp bed to stand in. I have known surgeons who purposely and ingeniously arranged these inconveniences with the avowed intention of driving away all women from their hospitals.

These annoyances could not have been endured by the nurses but for the knowledge that they were pioneers, who were, if possible, to gain standing ground for others. . . *

So this weekend, I certainly honor the anniversary of Sept. 11, 2001, and remember with a heavy heart the terrorism that caused tens of thousands to flee the capital, my former back yard. But I also can’t help but remember the anniversary of the Civil War, and celebrate the women whose heroism compelled them to stay. Read more about the incredible journey of Charlotte Waverly in Narrow Passages, to be released next spring from River North Fiction.

Read more about Jocelyn’s experience in Washington on 9/11 ten years ago. Visit her blog at .

*Bacon, Georgeanna Woolsey and Eliza Woolsey Howland, My Heart Toward Home: Letters of a Family During the Civil War. Roseville, Minnesota: Edinborough Press, 2001 (81).

5 Terrific Things for Tuesday: (We know it is Wednesday!)

5 fantastic books to read now that the kids are back in school

Now that your children are happily situated back at school you will have plenty of time to read! If you do happen to catch a few spare moments here are some suggestions from the fiction fanatics at River North.

Unveiled Freedom – by Jeanette Windle

This believable and timely story is told through 3 characters; Amy a young Christian NGO worker, Jamil a tortured soul and native Afghan, and Steve a cynical independent security contractor. Their lives intersect against the back drop of Afghanistan after the democratic elections and the implementation of Sharia law.  I appreciated the author’s grace-filled approach to Afghan culture and the challenging questions raised about Christian “interference”.  It has been 2-3 months since I finished Unveiled Freedom and I continue to ponder The Great Commission and closed cultures; it is that impactful.

–Holly, Marketing

 The Guernsey Literary and Potato Peel Pie Society–by Mary Ann Shaffer & Annie Barrows

Set shortly after the end of WWII main character and author Juliet Ashton receives a letter from one of the book club members on the tiny island of Guernsey. Written in epistolary form, Juliet’s circle of friends on the tiny island grows as they share their enchanting and moving stories of living through the darkness of war. They are all drawn closer together as a community because of one of the inspirational inhabitants of the island. I wanted to catch the next flight to England and meet all the book club members when I finished reading. You too will feel like you have a larger circle of friends. Check out the audio book at your local library, if you can. Lovely to hear all of the voices of the characters—it adds a lot to the telling of the story.

–Deb, Acquisitions 

The Pioneer Woman Cooks-by Ree Drummond

Every once in a while we all find ourselves in a routine for dinners that needs to be broken. This cookbook is the place for inspiration. The Pioneer Woman is a mother of 4 and a rancher’s wife. If she has time to whip up these great recipes, hopefully you can find time too, especially with school having started again. She has a great recipe for pizza with a homemade crust that is whole wheat and simple. She does a little bit of everything from Chicken Fried Steak to Asian Noodles with a very tasty glaze. There are plenty of pictures to draw you in and show you what you are aiming for. She also has plenty of dessert recipes to add to your collection. I have tried a handful of the recipes myself and our household is always satisfied, it is a little down home and a lot of delicious.

–Brittany, Editorial 

Almost Heaven – by Chris Fabry

As I read Almost Heaven, I couldn’t help but be touched deeply by the characters.  I was struck by their ordinary lives and ordinary dreams that God used in very mighty ways if even in a small community.   The tenderness of the main character was evident throughout the book even though he endured significant losses and unexpected turns.  Billy lived his life with the deepest desire to serve God & bring glory to Him in the midst of hardship, disappointment & failures.   I was profoundly moved by the gentleness of his spirit and the way in which God wove a beautiful tapestry out of the brokenness of Billy’s life.  Almost Heaven will encourage you to live your life, however ordinary you think it is, seeing the value in touching people’s lives not gaining wealth or notoriety. It will bring focus to what is important in this life and you will see the greatness of being used by God in ways you might never have expected.  Billy didn’t change the entire world, but God used him to change the lives of those he touched every day.  What more could we ask for?!

–Michele, Sales

Texas Trails Series – by Susan Page Davis, Vickie McDonough, and Darlene Franklin

Finally, we have to recommend a title of our own. Lone Star Trail and Captive Trail are two new releases here that we are so excited about. They are the first two in a series of six and they are sure to get you hooked.

The six-book series about four generations of the Morgan family living, fighting, and thriving amidst a turbulent Texas history spanning from 1845 to 1896 begins with Lone Star Trail.  Judson (Jud) Morgan’s father died for Texas’ freedom during the war for independence.  So when the Society for the Protection of German Immigrants in Texas (the Verein) attempts to colonize a New Germany in his country, he takes a stand against them. After Wande Fleischers’ fiancée marries someone else, the young fraulein determines to make new life for herself in Texas.  With the help of Jud’s sister Marion, Wande learns English and becomes a trusted friend to the entire Morgan family. As much as Jud dislikes the German invasion, he can’t help admiring Wande.  She is sweet and cheerful as she serves the Lord and all those around her.  Can the rancher put aside his prejudice to forge a new future? Through Jud and Wande, we learn the powerful lessons of forgiveness and reconciliation among a diverse community of believers.

Captive Trail is second in a six-book series about four generations of the Morgan family living, fighting, and thriving amidst a turbulent Texas history spanning from 1845 to 1896.  Although a series, each book can be read on its own. Taabe Waipu has run away from her Comanche village and is fleeing south in Texas on a horse she stole from a dowry left outside her family’s teepee.  The horse has an accident and she is left on foot, injured and exhausted.  She staggers onto a road near Fort Chadbourne and collapses. On one of the first runs through Texas, Butterfield Overland Mail Company driver Ned Bright carries two Ursuline nuns returning to their mission station.  They come across a woman who is nearly dead from exposure and dehydration and take her to the mission. With some detective work, Ned discovers Taabe Waipu identity. He plans to unite her with her family, but the Comanche have other ideas, and the two end up defending the mission station. Through Taabe and Ned we learn the true meaning of healing and restoration amid seemingly powerless situations.

We hope you find these suggestions helpful!

~Your fiction team!